Moonfire's Story

[Moon]

I thought I should put Moonfire's history in story form since it's interesting.
Characters
Moonfire: A sweet pup who is the main character in this story.

Firestone: Moonfire's evil brother. Beware.

Blizzard: Blizzard is Moonfire's father. He loves his children and wants nothing more than to keep them safe.

Snowstorm: This is Moonfire's mother. She's evil to the core and hated Moonfire from the start. She never named her only daughter and left her to die.

Jonto: Jonto took Moonfire in when she was abandoned. She raised her as her own and took care of her. Teaching her to hunt and fight.

Rani-Not much is known about him. He was young when Moonfire met him and stayed away from her.

Rayi-She is caring and will not fight anything. She can't hunt or fight and wanders around.

Prologue
Snowstorm walked quickly into her den her mate, Blizzard, close behind. "There coming," She snarls pacing quickly from one end to the other. "Lie down. You need to lie down," Blizzard says softly laying down near the mouth of the cave. "How can I," She growls laying down as well but still moving her paws. Blizzard stood up quickly and looked at her. "I know you need your privacy. I'll give it to," He whispers and pads out just as Snowstorm howls in pain. He flinches and hides in the bushes and twitches his ears.
Short I know. More coming soon.

[Moon]

Chapter 1
Blizzard wakes up after dosing off and pads into his den looking at the pups that lay suckling from their mother. "Their beautiful," He whispers. Snowstorm laughs. "I don't like the female. She's weak and doesn't show much potential. We'll have to leave her," She replies coldly looking at the wolf pup curled up in the corner. The pup was almost all white with a few black flecks and faint red dots running alone her back. She whimpered and shakes her head. I hate this! I don't feel wolf! Their saying their going to leave me. I don't want them to leave, She thought as a large brown and gray male walked closer to her. "Hello," He whisper sitting beside her. The pup turns away from him quickly and shuts her eyes. "Leave me alone," She whimpers.
Blizzard licks the pup gently and turns her around. "Don't be afraid. My little Moon," He whispers. The pup growls at him and looks down. "Leave me alone," She whispers back going further into the corner. "Listen my little Moon," Blizzard replies standing over her. The pup whimpers and shrinks back. "No," She whines. Snowstorm walks over and looks at Blizzard. "Come on. We have to go," She growls giving the female pup a disdainful look and shoving her mate away. "Fine," Blizzard whispers and walks out of the den leaving the pup alone with his mate. "You listen here, pup. You'll stay here and watch the den. Don't let anyone in or out," She snarls and walks away carrying Firestone in her jaws.
The pup whimpers and curls into a ball falling asleep to the sound of rain outside. A large brown bear walks into the cave and sniffs the wolf pup slowly and licks it. "Little one," She whispers. The pup opens it's eyes and shoves herself against the wall. "Calm down. You will be fine. Poor thing," The bear whispers and licks the pup gently. "I don't have a name," The pup growls looking at the bear. "Then your name will be Moonfire. For the Moon is out and you have fire in your pelt," The bear replies and tilts up looking at the pup. "Sleep little Moonfire," She whispers.